erti dge warsulidan
nucii
14 სექტ 2013, 15:19
,,iwvimebs"... Wamierad gamielva
tavshi da kvlav mshfotvare zgvas
vesrole dajinebuli mzera.
Gaaftrebuli talgebi ulmoblad
askdebodnen napirs, titqos
cdilobdnen ugimgamo qvishis
gamofxizlebas, magram
qvishasavit ki marcvaldebodnen
da uimedod ubrundebodnen
kalapots. Xandaxan dascheqda ca
da ukanasknel wamebs utvlida
mzis sxivebs, yovel gaelvebaze
warsulis kadrebi talgebivit
exetqebodnen mogonebebs. Im
avbedit dgesac wvimda, maxsovs
rogor uxdeboda mis tvalebs sveli
wamwamebi, yvelgan vgrdznob
am tbil mzeras da guls mtanjveli
sevdit mivsebs misi
miuwvdomloba... -,,gacivdebi
shvilo, sul mtlad kankaleb"(rusul
enaze)... Fiqrebidan gamomarkvia
xmam. Shevcbi da wamit
davibeni, didi xania aravis
utqvams chemtvis ,,shvilo",
meama, gonebashi ramdenjerme
eqosavit ganmeorda es nanatri
sityva. Movtrialdi, zurgs ukan
shuaxnis ucxo qali idga, namiani
tma gadmoshloda mxrebze,
wvimis pirveli wvetebi urcxvad
dacocavdnen mis fermkrtal
saxeze da tvalebi... Gmerto es
mwvane tvalebi rogor gavdnen
naocnebars...Mklavze xeli
shemaxo, -sul
gayinulxaro mitxra. Misma tbilma
shexebam damabruna realobashi
da ertianad vigrdzeni sicive, mis
win begurasavit mobuzuli
uxmod videqi da gatokebas ver
vaxerxebdi, mis udziro sevdian
tvalebs ver vwyvetdi mzeras.
Aseti tvalebi dedis dakargvis
shemdeg agar minaxavs... Qalma
mxrebze moxveuli mandili
sheixsna da momaxvia, gavyevit
napirs zgvidan sul ufro shors.
Ragac wamebis shemdeg enit
auwereli sitbo vigrdzeni, ar vici
mandili ufro matbobda tu misi
mklavebi, romlebsac gultan
vyavdi mikruli, maxsovs ase deda
gamaxvevda xolme sabanshi
dzilis win... Moumata wvimam da
chvenc avuchqaret nabijebs,
zgvastan asiode metrshi ert
patara koxta ezoshi shevedit,
axlad ayvavebuli alubali da
ramodenime dziri tita xaliss
matebda kar-midamos. Shin
shemiyvana, samzareuloshi
damsva da gazquraze chaidani
shemodga. Me jer isev
gonebaareuli shevcqerodi am
qalis titoeul gatokebas da
chemshi warsuli da awmyo
ireoda, misi mzeris yovel
gaelvebaze ufro da ufro
vmunjdebodi da sitbo
nakadulebad igvreboda sisxlshi...
Magidaze shegebili witeli
kvercxebi da paska dado, ori
finjani chai daasxa, erti me
damidga win, meore ki gverdit
otaxshi seitana, maleve
gamobrunda iqidan da chem win
chamojda.Garindebuli miyurebda,
xan sitbo
da sinaze igvreboda misi
tvalebidan, xan ki mat adgils
udidesi sevda ikavebda, romelic
verafrit amexsna... Fanjaras
mivapyari tvali
-gadaigebs da waval...
Chavilaparake nadzaladevad,
radgan wasvla ki ara gatokebac
ar mindoda adgilidan. Man
gamigima da saubris dawyeba
scada:
-miyvars agdgoma, mxolod am
dges vgrdznob mis siaxloves...
shav charchoshi chasmul tavisive
asakis mamakacis gacrecil fotos
gahxeda da tvalebi cremlit
aevso... Me isev vdumdi, arada
rogor mindoda sul patara
nugeshi mainc mimeca... Jibidan
cxvirsaxocshi gaxveuli qvisha
amoigo da gulshi chaixuta...
-misi saflavidanaa... Tirilnarevi
xmit chailughlugha, tvalebshi
dagubebuli sevda cremlebad
waskda da mis ghawvebze iwyo
dena.
-deda... Moisma gverdita otaxidan
axalgazrda gogos xma. Qalic
umal wamodga fexze da mastan
gavida. Shevkrti radgan aqamde
ver shevnishne iq vinmes yofna.
Ertxans vijeqi ase da vucqerdi
kars sadac is shevida.
Ramodenime wutis shemdeg
wamovdeqi da mdzime nabijebit
frtxilad mivuaxlovdi, kari odnav
shevaghe da shevixede...
Davinaxe logintan muxlebze
damxobili qali, loginshi gogo
iwva, titqmis chemi asakisa,
atirebuli deda gulshi yavda
chakruli, logintan etli shevnishne,
mis danaxvaze titqos mexi
dameca, ragac dzalam tu
udzlurebam suli damibinda da
vigrdzeni rogor sheicvala irgvliv
samyaro... Wamis shemdeg
ezoshi videqi, titqos vcdilobdi
nanaxi gameyolebina wvimistvis
zgvamde rom chems suls axal
iarebad ar dastyoboda...
Magram...
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nucii
14 სექტ 2013, 15:21
mapatiet cota baraqiani gamomivida .meala.
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MISTER X
24 სექტ 2013, 10:45
verafrit ver mivxvdi pirvel da meore adgilze gasuli motxrobebi rit sjobia am motxrobas.   ertsac da meoresac rbilad rom vtqva "marili"aklia. tu nacnoboba axloblobamegobrobastan ar gvaqvs saqme, mashin ashkaraa rom jiuris cevrebs arc literaturis araferi gaegebat da arc adamianta sevdis. gramatikaze xom laparakic zedmetia. mokled nuci, aravis sheuarcyofas ar vayeneb magram shens motxrobastan pirvel meore adgilze gasulebi axlosac ver mivlen. bravo.
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Aristokratka
24 სექტ 2013, 11:12
Martali rom vtqva: am nacersac aklia "ragac" .
Icyeb kitxvas da nebisyofis fasad gicevs kitxva.ai es aaqvs naklad. Mxatvruli amozaxili aklia. Es mxolod chemi azria.
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BLEATCH
24 სექტ 2013, 11:31
grzeli sityva mokled itkmis bolomde vinc waikitxa rkinis nervebi qonia
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MISTER X
24 სექტ 2013, 12:02
aq mcerali aravinaa da arc shedevris dacera aravis moetxoveboda. mxatvruli amozaxili akliao. iqneb vinmem ganmanatlot pirvel da meore adgilze gasul motxrobebshi ra mxatvruli girebulebaa am motxrobastan shedarebit meti?  me erti uvici amdens ver vxvdebi da tu vinke amixsnit kargi iqneba. ogond iman amixsnas visac martla esmis da chemze shteri nu daicyebs ragaceebis bodials, chemi dasacini rom ar gaixados tavi.
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Aristokratka
24 სექტ 2013, 13:15
Aq am nacerzea saubari da ara im danarchen orze. Meore adgilze gasulisas es jobs radgan iq choxelze da mis gmirebze ufroa saubari. Piradad me nucisgan bevrad girebuls movelodi. 
Rac sheexeba paatas namushevars "jambazi" (mister-x avgnishnav rom paatastan aranairi arc nacnoboba makavshirebs da arc simpatiit var mis mimart gancyobili.piriqit!) jobda yvelas! Riti? Masshi ido grma shinaarsi,gancda,sevdiani gimilic da tkivilic.mxatvruli tvalsazrisit : sulac ar iyo gaformebuli da gadatvirtuli.
Sakitxavad :msubuqi,ubralo,saintereso da mzafri finali.
Am yvelafers ki ert mtlianobasi aqcevda misi scorad shercheuli satauri.
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Aristokratka
24 სექტ 2013, 13:28
Da kidev erti: mcerali aravinaa da arc utxovia aravis iyavio! Raxan mcerali aravinb e.i. Ra vqnat?!.......
Ar gamovxatot azri?!
Rac sheexeba jiurs : mxolod erti iyo scorad shercheuli. Mon ami!
Es sami namushevari sxvebs jobda,am samidan ki "jambazi" danarchen ors!
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Aristokratka
24 სექტ 2013, 14:55
Kidev erti ram minda avgnishno nucis nacersi:
icyebs agcerit.agceris arealsi eqceva zgva, talgebi ,cvima da a.sh. Fiqris fonze, carsulidan ixsenebs ert dges da im erti dgis agcerilobas aigivebs,im dgestan rodesac ixsenebs.
Areti dasacyisi aset istorias romelsac is ixsenebs.... Ar jdeba ertmanetsi. iseti grznoba dameufla kitxvisas titqos nucis sul sxva ramis dacera undoda roca  daicyo cera, cvimit,zgvit, boboqari talgebit da ratomgac titqos gadaifiqra da sheusabamo gamoaba. Anu rac surda realurad daecera titqos cerisas shecvala. An sulac ar hqonda monaxazi raze unda daecera da miyva da gamovida es!
Ai aman daukarga interesi chems tvalsi mis nacers da uemociod chavikitxe,rasac ver vityvi paatas nacerze.
Paatas erti patara motxroba maqvs aq cakitxuli kidev zaglze. Ubralo da yovelgvari zizilpipiloebis gareshea naceri.zalian momecona mashin is motxroba. Ubralod xelis shevleba undoda xelaxla da didebuli iqneboda. 
Da roca jambazi cavikitxe, zustad igive stili cerisa rac adre vigrzeni. Ubralo da emociuri! Es didi plusia. Me vfiqrob rom mas es xatvis nichtan aqvs asocirebuli.anu xatvisas xom imas xatav rasac ganicdi, ragacas,vigacas patara "istoriidan".
Dajeqit da daidet cin nucis da paatas namushevrebi da romeli chagekitxebat interesit,moubezreblad  da romeli ufro mzafria tavad gansajet!
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EaGLe
24 სექტ 2013, 14:56
1993 wlis 30 dekemberi... Davibade bliad :D
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nucii
24 სექტ 2013, 15:39
kritika shobs geniosebs :D es ,,zizilpipiloebit,, savse ,,momabezrebeli,, motxroba me tqvens sakamatod ar damiweria, arc shemitxzavs da arc winaswari monaxazis mixedvit shemiqmnia. Es chemi cxovrebis realuri tkivilia da wvimashic, qarshic, tovlshic, zgvazec da mtashic sul chemtan aris. Winaswar chafiqrebuli da mere gadaxveulic araperia mashi da personajebic ar gamomigonia (ara da iqneb jobda kidec rame shetxzuli istoria damewera) Me chemi sulis tkivili gadmoveci, mapatiet magram martla usiamovnoa roca mas ise ganixilaven rogorc ubralo sakonkurso masalas da meubnebian ra rogor unda damewera, ara, kritika martla ar mwyins, ubralod aset shemtxvevashi memtkivneula. Adre tu gvian am istorias mainc sadme davwerdi, sxvagvarad ver movisvenebdi, ubralod exla ase daemtxva.
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bZzziki
24 სექტ 2013, 17:01
[url=http://archive.wapforum.ge/viewtopic.php?p=21053&cit]ციტატა:  nucii daikide ;) sheni naweri realuria Da cxovrebiseuli. Amdeni akaki shanidze Ra ambavia,to :S:S

Da eagle xar Tu amdagvari,esierad ilaparake .mdaa.
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MISTER X
25 სექტ 2013, 22:15
mokled asea. ertia rasxedav da meorea risi danaxva ginda. kidev mesamea visshi ras edzeb. uemociod chavikitxeo.. me piradat paatas motxrobis cakitxvisas emociashi"shesvlac" ver movascari ise damtavrda. samagierod nucis motxrobam titqmis srulad damakmayofila. iq iyo mzafri siujeti. dasacyisi amindis da adgilmdebareobis agcerit. aset situaciashi gancdili da gachenili emociebi, igive situaciidan gamocveuli carsuli tkivilis gaxseneba da am tkivilit agzruli emociebi romelic mxatvrulad mshvenivradaa agcerili. shemdgomi ganvitareba, axali personis gamochena txrobashi  da am personit mier axali gancdebis da emociebis agzvra motxrobis gmirshi. mokled aqaa yvelaferi rac adamianur sevdas emociebs da gancdebs asaxavs da gadmocems da tu vinmem es uemociod chaikitxa probkema sakutar tavshi unda ezebos da ara motxrobashi.
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B I B I
25 სექტ 2013, 22:40
es is ambavia dawerili gulit, sheidzleba ar da ver shemkuli lamazi epitetebit da mxatvrulobit, romelmac sheidzleba ar gamoiwvios dzlieri emocia, magram gultan mainc modis. Chemshi movida sitbo da gimili ert lamaz frazaze. Davinaxe ukve isedac danaxuli tkivilebi adamianta cxovrebashi. Iqneb imitom ar moqmedebs chemistana kritikosebze mdzafrad da emociurad rom ukve bevri gvinaxia bevri aseti dardi an chven vart amistvis metismetad civebi. Magram shen plusi chemgan nuci :) yoveltvis tqvi satqmeli. Dawere dasaweri. Damerwmune amden adamianshi erti mainc dainaxavs da igrdznobs imas rac shen gigrdzunia da es ukve didi girebulebis shemdzenia.
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B I B I
25 სექტ 2013, 22:44
,, gmerto es mwvane tvalebi, rogor gavdnen naocnebars,, . . . Aq iyo chemi gimili swored :)
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bZzziki
16 ოქტ 2013, 12:13
[url=http://archive.wapforum.ge/viewtopic.php?p=21966&cit]ციტატა:  B I B I mec mag azrze var. Naweri rac unda lamazad iyos "gaformebuli",mainc etyoba,Tu avtori azrze araa,raze wers.

veranairi dzala ver maidzulebs,meored wavikitxo msgavsi motxroba. Cariela sityvebia damitom.
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AC MILAN
16 ოქტ 2013, 12:48
kargia ro dawere es motxroba tu novela.
Vinc ar wert ra uplebi akritikebt?jer tqven daweret uketesi da mere akritiket
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